Tomorrow was Rob’s birthday, he was very avid about it. However, everyone still remembers what happened when he celebrated his birthday last year. It was on November 3, 2016, he was having a swimming party and it was very fun! But, it was far from it. Everything went pretty normal until it was time for cake. The guests started to sing the “Happy Birthday” song. Rob went to blow out the candle and his hair caught on fire! The white-flame was so hot it scorched all his hair off! Rob described it as excruciating. From then on Rob hated candles.
Elijah you said swimming party when it is a pool party meaning you used the word incorrectly.
Great job Eijah, your post was terrific. You used all the words required for the 100 WC. Also, you used the Worldy Wise words in a great way. Overall, good job keep up the good work
Good job Elijah. You included details wich made your story sound more real .
Wow. I liked your story because you wrote about something different like Rob’s hair burning off. 🙂 Poor Rob.
Great job Elijah! Your story was very entertaining and descriptive. Keep up the great work!